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Peoplemaygejobsowice,oreveimesforvariousreasons,andIamioasanassistantinaprivatephysi'soffidthenasanX-rayteinahospital。However,oedtoworkialdidIrealizethatwhereismorefulfillingthanwiephysi'soffice。
Ial,,thereisneveradullmoment。Iworkatientsanddocethehospitalisananization,noonerushesme,andIamabletotakemytimeatient。Italkwiththepatieheirmedicalhistory。IdohoughIamthetheworkbecausethestaffislargeenoughtodoalltheworkrequired。Alsothedoctorsarenientusonajobwelldoimeishecafeteriaistandthepricesarereasployeesonlytendollarsaday。AslongasIuetoworkfulltime,myhospitalizationinsuranceisfullypaid。ThebestthingaboutthejobisthatIamofextrawork。AllIamrequiredtodoistoX-raythepatientsandshowalotofiihem。
&ephysi'sofficewhereIusedtoworkwasentirelydifferent。Mahedootintheoffideverythingwasdelayed。Becausetheoffitomakeaprofit,theworkwasrushed,andIwasakemytimeatient。Itwaslikeanassemblyli'emi'emout”,Iwastold。Lunchtimeroblem。IfIdidnmylunch,Ihadtogotoafast-foodrestaurantthateeless。TherearkingfortheemployeesandnoihewwasthatIhadtodonotonlyX-rayworkbutalselsethatg,ingbriorcoffee。
IamgladtohavehadtheopportunitytoeriehplasequentlyIamabletwhatthehospitalprovideexceedsthatoftheprivatephysi'soffikstotheextwehehospital,Iyfullcapacity。IfIfijobthemostsuitableohelongrun,Iwillprobablysticktoitfortherestofmylife。
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