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Section Eight Parallelism（第1页）

SeEightParallelism

Parallelism（orparallelstructure）istheuseofaseriesofwords，phrases，subordinateclauses，orseobeparallel，eatmustmatchtheothers；inotherwords，allelementsinaseriesshouldbeallnouives，adverbs，orverbsintheform。

1。Parallelwords

1）Writingisaslowprsiderablethought，time，a。

&obed，earlytorise，makesamahy，wealthy，andwise。

3）Ihereareenoughtimesointed，depressedandannoyed。

4）Theuaeographically，spirituallyandprofessionally。

5）Eahasauniquewayofseeioug，tastingandthinking。

6）Thethreemostonpurparetoeoinform，andtopersuade。

2。Parallelphrases

1）Theadventurous（历险者）arefreetofollowthesmallesttracks（小路）upthemountains，acrossthedesertsoris。

2）Thekeystradesaretotakeeffeotesinclass，toplanstudytime，andtopreparecarefullyforexams。

3）Welear，experie，andhopeforsuthefuture。

4）Seeingmuch，sufferingmudstudyingmucharethethreepillars（支柱）。

3。Parallelsubordinateclauses

1）Johhisbookwouldbepublished，thatitwouldbeeabestseller，andthatitwouldbemadeintoamovie。

2）Sheisawomaands，whoenjoyshouseorshipsherhusband。

3）Somecollegegraduatesattendlawschoolbecausetheyhopetogethigh-payingjobs，becausetheyareowork，aheyareelsetodo。

4。Parallelsentences

1）Therearethreewaystomakemoney。Youheritit。Youmarryit。Youstealit。

2）AllofJimmy'sfriendssayheisawuy。Whenafriendneedsmoney，Jimmyisreadytolendit。Whenafriendneedssomehelp，Jimmyistheretogivehimahand。Whenafriendneedsaride，Jimmyofferstotakehim。EveryonelovesJimmyandthi。Buthiswifethioogenerous。

3）Similarly，atomseandgoinamolecule（分子），butthemoleculeremains；moleeandgoihecellremains；eandgoinabody，butthebodyremains；personseandganization，buttheanizationremains。

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Faultyparallelismosesdohesamegrammatietypicalexamplesarelistedbelow:

1）Ourteacherteacheswithskillandhumorously。

2）ProfessorCrayaskedherstudentstoclosetheirbooks，totakeoutapenandapieceofpaper，andthattheyweretowriteashortposition。

3）Ingacareer，youshouldplancarefullyandalsosomereseareeded。

&ehesameproblem:faultyparallelism。Ience1），skillisanoun，buthumorouslyisanadverb。Ihefirsttwoelemeivephrases，yetthethirdo。Ihefirstelemeivevoice，yettheseentisshiftedtothepassivevoiecessarily。

Tobeparallel，elementsiallbeexpressedii。Theabovesentenbecorrectedasfollows:

4）Ourteacherteacheswithskillandhumor。

5）ProfessorCrayaskedherstudentstoclosetheirbooks，totakeoutapenandapieceofpaper，andtowriteashortposition。

6）Ingacareer，youshouldplancarefullyandalsodosomeresearch。

Practice2-8-1

&ifywhieachpairbelowsacorrectparallelstrudusparallelelements。Ansrovided。

1。（a）Hetookthejobbeeededmoneyaedexperience。

（b）Hetookthejobbeeededtoearnsomemoneyandex-periencewouldbeusefultohim。

2。（a）Joblessandpoor，thestudenthadtodropoutofschool。

（b）Withoutajobandpoor，thestudenthadtodropoutofschool。