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Section Five Redundancy（第1页）
SeFiveRedundancy
Redundancyisverbal（文字中的）obesitybecauseredundantexpressionsaddnothingtowhathasalreadybeensaidienesestudents&#s，redundanainlyintwoforms。
1。Theitionofahrase
1）EmplitinglydifficulttofindpeoplewhosedEhext。
&ence1），findisanaeatedword。Youreplacethesedwithasynonym:
2）Emplitinglydifficulttohire（orrecruit）peoplewhosedEhext。
2。Theitionofanidea
1）MyfuturehopeisthatIgetacetotravelaroundtheworld。
&euresimplyrepeatsthemeanimodifies，sofutureisaneedlesswordandshouldbeeliminated:
2）MyhopeisthatIgetacetotravelaroundtheworld。
Ioavoidredundaandeicaldi。Repeatahraseoisneededforemphasisorclarity。
Practice2-5-1
&forredundaencebelow，youunnecessarywordorphraseandsubstitutebetterwordorphrase，orrewritetheeensrovidedonlyassuggestions。
1。Onlybegihoseerienetest。
2。Thereasonformyabseerdaywasbecauseofillness。
3。Thosewhofollowdiresarefewinnumber。
&hattheremarkabouthisreputationwetohisreputation。
5。ThereisoThompsontrustsandthatishiswife。
6。Atdaybreakthism，akenedbynoisescausedbysomethingdo>
7。Thisiinginstruowshowtomakeaieresting。
8。Ihadgotacold。So，assoonasIgothomeandgotywetdgotsomemedieoutofthecupboard（橱柜）。
9。Iofferedtheticketstothecerttothestudeurday。
10。Thedifferewoteachersisthattheyhavedifferentopinionsaboutthestudeeag。
Practice2-5-2
Thefollowiainingredundaedfromesestudents&#s。Toeditforredundaencebelow，youunnecessarywordorphraseandsubstitutebetterwordorphrase，orrewritetheeensrovided。
1。TherearemanyesepeoplewhoarestudyingEnglish。
2。People'swillforabetterlifewillneverend。
3。Nowadays，Englishisaionallanguageallovertheworld。
4。Peoplewhoaresuccessfulmustbediligentpeople。
5。pariballgameswithfootballgames，Ilikebasketballgames。
6。Ourteamandyourteamareextteams。
7。Moreandmoreeseowntheiro>
8。Moreandmestudentswhatuydon'tliveinthecollege。However，theyliveoffcampus。
9。Todealwithanger，youshouldfirstshutupyourmouth。
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11。Ifyoulikedeliciousfoods，youtastedifferentkindsofdeliciousfyourtravel。
12。Wheodifficulty，wewillgiveyouahandtohelpyouoverethedifficulty。
